Hi readers I have brought my Ancient forest-[Titan boa] writing
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I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McClelland. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
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Kia ora patrik. My favorate part was when the titanoboa grabed the raptor and swallowd it. I was interested to read it becase a titanoboa is a snake. I know its a snake. To improve you can put more detail. Did you think about my favorate creature? From Warren.
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