Hi readers I have brought you my acrostic poem about tanks.
I hope you enjoy it.
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McClelland. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi readers I have brought you my acrostic poem about tanks.
I hope you enjoy it.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi Patrick its me Warren. i like all the detail you added. i like when you said angry shooting machine on the war field. and killing machine with massive cannon. next time you could decorate it more.bye.
ReplyDeleteI love this work, it has helped me learn more about your favourite vehicles. I thought next time you could use more slides, because you know a lots of tank and their details too. :-) I can't wait to see what you will write next time.
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