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Friday, October 16, 2020

patrik acrostic poem.

       


Hi readers I have brought you my acrostic poem about tanks.

I hope you enjoy it.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Patrick its me Warren. i like all the detail you added. i like when you said angry shooting machine on the war field. and killing machine with massive cannon. next time you could decorate it more.bye.

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  2. I love this work, it has helped me learn more about your favourite vehicles. I thought next time you could use more slides, because you know a lots of tank and their details too. :-) I can't wait to see what you will write next time.

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