Mini Lesson- Similes
Now: Make these similes better
Hi,This is my simile work, I worked on it for 2 days.It was really easy to do These are simple things. It was easy to make better sentences from the simpler ones.
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McClelland. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Mini Lesson- Similes
Name: | Date: | ||
Image | like / as | Create a simile for the image | |
Like | The jellyfish swam like a swan. | ||
As | The jellyfish was as big as my palm. | ||
Like | The rainbow was like a drawing | ||
As | The rainbow was as colourful as a painting. | ||
Like | The lighting stoke into the ground like a Stuka’s bomb | ||
As | The lightning was as bright as a light bolt. | ||
Now: Make these similes better
Old, original (weak) simile | New, better (strong) simile |
As fresh as a daisy. | As fresh as a water drop |
As busy as a bee. | As busy as a hive of bees |
As flat as a pancake. | As flat as a piece of paper |
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