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Friday, August 13, 2021

Easter eggs

      Easter Eggs



The Easter egg’s tinfoil looks colourful and tiny like Quail’s egg.The Easter egg inside has the colour of coffee.


The Easter egg’s tin foil feels rough and crunchy but the inside is soft and squishy.


The Easter egg’s outer chocolate layer tasted like normal milk chocolate.The inside creamy part tasted like coffee.


By Patrik



1 comment:

  1. Hi Patrik! This description shows us your Easter egg in every part - I'd like to eat it right now. Next time, please check your writing, because you used The Easter egg word a lot of time. :-)

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